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Sunday, April 01, 2012

Chand Roz Aur Meri Jaan........ Faiz Ahmed Faiz

An attempted poetic translation, not a literal one, of Faiz Ahmed Faiz Sahab's Urdu nazm, 'Chand Roz Aur Meri Jaan'. To paint Faiz Sahab's canvas in a foreign tongue, is the humble task I undertake, but the ever graceful Urdu language, in my opinion, can never be restored in a translation. Nevertheless, I try to satiate my own ego!

English Transliteration from the original Urdu

Chand roz aur, Meri Jaan! Faqat chand hi roz,
Zulm ki chaaon me dum lene pe majboor hain hum,
Aur kuch der sitam seh lein, Tadap lein, Ro lein,
Apne ajdaad ki miraas hai, M'aazoor hain hum,
Jism par qaid hai, Jazbaat pe zanjeerein hain,
Fikr mahboos hai, Guftaar pe t'aazirein hain,
Apni himmat hai keh hum phir bhi jiye jaate hain,
Zindagi kya kisi muflis ki qaba hai jis mein,
Har ghadi dard ke paivand lage jaate hain,
Lekin ab zulm ki mi'aad ke din thode hain,
Ik zara sabr ke faryaad ke din thode hain,
Arsa-e-dehr ki jhulsi hui weeraani mein,
Hum ko rehna hai par yoon hi toh nahi rehna,
Ajnabi haathon ka benaam garaan-baar sitam,
Aaj sehna hai, Hamesha toh nahin sehna hai,
Yeh tere husn se lipti hui aalaam ki gard,
Apni do roza jawaani ki shekaston ka shumaar,
Chaandni raaton ka bekaar dehekta hua dard,
Dil ki besood tadap, Jism ki maayoos pukaar,
Chand roz aur, Meri Jaan! Faqat chand hi roz...........

A few more days, my Love!

A few more days, my Love! Merely a handful more,
Condemned to exist, Thou and I, Eclipsed in tyranny,
Bear with me the cruel winds, smart and weep,
My inheritance, My lineage demands, I'm but a mere cripple,
My shackled extremities, My manacled spirits,
Imprisoned my every thought, Every word restrained,
All that remains is courage, And hence I persist,
The drapery, My life, A tatterdemalion's flowing robe,
Patched, In tatters, With fragments of pain,
But the times of oppression would soon cease,
Persevere, Our laments would soon cease,
In this desolate, parched desert sands,
We must now last, But not forever stand,
This crushing weight of an alien conjuring,
We must now endure, But not forever withstand,
The air of distress that tenderly envelops thy form,
The numerous gashes of our deficient youth,
Moonlit nights, Fruitless pangs of throbbing pain,
Unanswered cries of the poor heart, The body's melancholic strain,
A few more days, my Love! Merely a handful more...........

10 comments:

renjith said...

good effort, way to go!

Ashok Subramanian P said...

Thanks a lot!

Sneha said...

Thanks for ripping my heart apart with this one!

Ashok Subramanian P said...

The pleasure is mine! ;)

Unknown said...

there is a minor typo I guess. maiaad should better be transliterated as miyaad or miaad.
I hope we are talking about DURATION = miyaad here.

Otherwise, fantastic effort but as you said, the sweetness of urdu can hardly be caught in another language.

Ashok Subramanian P said...

Faiz bhai, aap bilkul sahi kah rahe ho. Theek karta hoon. Shukriya.

Unknown said...

Please add word to word translation...
Word followed by it's meaning....
Am finding it difficult to find all words....
I am waiting desperately.....

Unknown said...

Please add word to word translation...
Word followed by it's meaning....
Am finding it difficult to find all words....
I am waiting desperately.....

Unknown said...

Take a bow sir... I'm such a huge fan of the urdu qords but your English words are also mesmerising... Brilliant!!!

Anonymous said...

Beautiful translation .Beautifully chosen words .Very rare that another language can be used to justify the subtleties of another language specially in poetry. Wonderfully executed. Kudos .